Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Winter Poem

Crisp Crunches
Crunch,Crunch
I really love that beautiful sound
Listen to the sounds of winter
Crunch
The frozen flakes of the sky
Crunch,Crunch
Falling from the heavens
White dots all over you
Crunch
The white shield on every lawn
Crunch
Perfectly fallen
Crunch
Fresh crystals 
Crunch, Crunch
Whitest of whites
Nature's freeze
Crunch
*Stomp stomp*
Getting the snow off your boots
Warmth
Rosy Cheeks
Creamy hot chocolate
Dazzling tree
Home for the holidays
Perfect
Brought home
by those crisp crunches.

2 comments:

  1. This really shows the concept of snow. I think that it showed that you were inspired by the snow on the ground. Yesterday when it started snowing I was like, "YES, YES, YES finally it looks like Christmas!" This piece is unique because of the repeating of words. I love this piece :)

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  2. Good Job Sarah!!(: This is really good! I love the use of alliteration in this poem by repeating "crunch" after each stanza. Really good choice of words also!

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