Author's Note: I really hate this essay, so just don't judge me. I'm actually writing a different one which will be better.
Flag of the Founding Fathers
There
are many amazing people who founded this great country, each one a single
stitch in the red, white, and blue flag that proudly waves in the air. Think
about it, if you could talk to those great heroes, what would you say? I would want
to thank the Founding Fathers for everything that they done right for our
country.
“Thank you for voting rights!” would be the first I would tell them. Voting has let the people of U.S.A. have a say in
who runs the country. Also, voting makes our voice be heard and gives people a
decision to really think about.
In this way, we are different than other countries who don't get to choose, who might not even care about how their country is lead. Voting gives us hope in bad times because the candidates deliver well-thought speeches to give their message and we pick the one that we think can push America forward.
In this way, we are different than other countries who don't get to choose, who might not even care about how their country is lead. Voting gives us hope in bad times because the candidates deliver well-thought speeches to give their message and we pick the one that we think can push America forward.
Voting
was a good decision, but I would also say “Thanks
for establishing everything”. I mean, making laws from the very beginning
controlled what happened here. Creating the Declaration of Independence was perfect; It was like the official document that made this country a whole. As the founders established states and
cities, they basically created the U.S.A. that we have today.
“
I mostly thank you for freedom.” We live in such a great country, and we barely
know it. We are so lucky for a strong, developed, free country. This country is blessed by having so many freedoms like freedom of speech
and freedom of religion. Citizens here are free to follow our their own paths and
are free to decide. Freedom overall was
the best thing the Founding Fathers did for this country and without freedom, everything for us would be a lot different.
The
beautiful flag that soars in the air shows our Founding Fathers, still looking
over us. They created the amazing country that we have now. From the choices
they have made and the things that they did, the Founding Fathers really knew
what they were doing and we will never forget them.
I really like the stitch part! I like how you connected it to the flag but maybe you could say something more of the flag since your going to talk about it. Over all its really good espesially with the intro!
ReplyDeleteGood Job on this essay! It was hard for everyone to write this and actually have fun with it. But somehow you made it work when you wrote your introduction and how you tied it back into your conclusion. I liked how you used real dialogue to show you were actually speaking to the founding fathers also.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job!
-Meghan