Author's Note: If your going to read the book Stargirl then don't read this. (I give away the ending)
When
a strange girl comes to a new school, she opens the eyes of an ordinary boy. Soon the
whole school goes into a frenzy for her, but that slowly slips away
as they relieve she’s just plain crazy. As everyone turns on her, the boy
becomes more close to her and when she moves away, he finds her hideout where
her craziness really occurred.
Great piece Sarah! You really focused on the main issues and supported them with great details. However, you may want try using different word choice in this piece because I felt you used "crazy" too much. Also you author's note was a good "head's up" signal to warn people not to read your piece if they are reading the book or are going to. Good Job!
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